Missing The Obvious

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(or: Doh!)

I hate when I'm struggling with some piece of writing, and I'm hemming and hawing and dilly-dallying, instead of actually writing, because I KNOW something's "wrong" with whatever it is, but I can't quite figure it out so the chapter or story or whatever is going nowhere fast and then suddenly I SEE it and it turns out the answer has been there all along - as in, had I bothered to READ my own writing, I would have seen all the clues to where the chapter or story or whatever was "supposed" to be going and saved myself a butt-load of beating my head against the wall, false-starts, procrastinatory activities and a whole slew of Angry Letters to my characters, muse, and assorted other scapegoats, not to mention TIME. Sheesh.

(God, I love run-on sentences.)

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Karyn said…
Go easy on yourself, sis! This is what makes writing work...seriously. EVERY writer does that stuff and the ones that don't are the ones who work from set outlines - and you can TELL they work from outlines. I know it's frustrating - I've been there - but take a deep breath, stop beating yourself up and go with the flow.

Okay - and scream occassionally (quietly if the baby is sleeping) cause it IS damn frustrating work sometimes!
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